September 19, 2005

shower clean

The suds from my hair clung
bubble white halo
And I was clean, cleaning
in the shower with my sandals on --
so even my toes aren't dirty


And I saw you
what to do?!
no bother
I don't mind being nude
will mind my bubble business,
and clean a bit more


But at you parasite, I stare instead
foreign object in my shower,
tumor in my skin.
And then an avalanche --
of soap and scalding water
pouring, pouring
from my hair as I bend over
covering you, drowning you,
as I reach for a bar of soap
frothy tentacles, my hair Medusa's snakes

you're underwater and wiggling,
but I don't move my head --
watch you instead
in a quarter inch of water
struggling, eight legs flailing
and a hollow arachnid scream

I grab a bobby pin,
thin metal gurney, a stretcher --
hurry up, up, out of the water,
you slide off I try again,
again, come now little thing --
move for me! hold on!

And before I swallow the bubbles around my tongue,
you're spread against the tiles
still, soft, legs wrapped like a sea creature on the pin

your chariot to arachnid Heaven
where the webs are golden,
and spacious, and safe --
far from soapy college girls

little thing, little thing

what have I done?

Posted by lizg at September 19, 2005 12:50 PM
Comments

it should have been titled "Spread against the tiles" cause that was awesome.

"where the webs are golden" was also a great thought

my favorite liz granger shower poem. hopefully college brings more of these

Posted by: joel at September 19, 2005 1:42 PM

you give the spider too much credit.
ive almost slipped and died because i saw a spider while showering

Posted by: sir pirate jack at September 19, 2005 4:23 PM

you are a hot watered killer.

Posted by: Jmac at September 19, 2005 6:36 PM

there is a well known spider story told in elementary school

it tells of spiders being givers of life
but it sounds like you gave him plenty of respect so fear not!

Posted by: Jeff at September 20, 2005 12:23 AM

i thought this was about sex in the beginning

Posted by: jayme at September 21, 2005 4:56 PM
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